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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : the war


cool jeddah
29-07-2006, 06:34 PM
Why?? Really it’s not fair ..

You love some one but you can't get him ..

When you love some one and you're ready to die for him

But he doesn't care about you

It's not fair

When you do everything to get some thing

But you don’t get it ..

It's not fair what's happening now ..

people dieing. killing children

A war..

Well .. we don’t know..

Maybe the

World war 3

Coming soon..

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we just sit and seeing what happening..

And saying: it's not fair…

Is it a punishment from God or a test?

If is a punishment. we ask God to forgive us..

But if is a test.. we will patienting

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God with you

Barcelona_xs
29-07-2006, 07:40 PM
Cool Jeddah

First of all. I’d liked to show my appreciation for your wonderful start in writing in English
However, the beginning of your topic was a little far from the actual idea or your point of view !!
You started to talk about our loved ones and how they sometimes don’t treat us the same way as we do
And also you’ve talked about how we do everything possible to get what we want but we don’t have it
Yes all of those things seem unfair but it’s still far away from the actual meaning of your subject

If you want to talk about War, start to talk about it and about its effects, don‘t write about anything else because it will confuse the readers!!!
But you made your point clear quickly!!
Wars is terrible events and what we see them now in Lebanon, Palestine and in Iraq , it is really against humanity !!!
Maybe it’s a test from god to show how much we believe in him!!
I pray that God he’s all mighty to bring back our lands, to end these wars and to spread peace all over our countries !!!

Dear cool Jeddah
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and thank you for writing it in English :p

God bless you
Barcelona